Change the language throughout to "humans" or "humanity" instead of "men" and "women" because some people do not relate to these gender labels and do not find their value in that language.

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Fri, 2008-02-15 22:58
everyone is human

This is a good drafting point. For the most part we have used "everyone" instead of "humans." Everyone is human.